Love the snakey rhythm. I would add a little more to the guitar volume in the mix when it starts punching. I love dynamics. Soft when it's soft
and hard when it's hard. It keeps my attention. That is meant as creative criticism, not criticizing.
edit on 24-7-2014 by skunkape23
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Great tune! Reminded me of Pink Floyd. With that long intro I thought it was an instrumental at first but when the signing starts the whole thing
comes together nicely.