Is this a Haiku? I think it's a Haiku.

My god femininity,
personal aspect my dearest.
#, I am faithless.

That attempt at potentially artistic expression aside… Ugh, who writes haiku's? Brought to you by! Life and good scotch!

A haiku is 5 7 5
First line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables
Like this....

I like ATS
It's where I get my news from
Not from MSM

Hope that helps

I am not certain.
Words are endless streams flowing.
Flatulence denied.

I have never understood the mystery of the Haiku. I don't know why it's even done.

I also don't know if you got it right or not.

If you did... Great Job! If you didn't... you suck. I don't think you were really even trying.

Our president sucks
He tells lies almost daily
He should be removed

JHumm
Our president sucks
He tells lies almost daily
He should be removed

Could not agree more
Birth Certificate has holes
Let's invade Russia

Ha, words. 5, 7, 5.

Too drunk to properly haiku a reply, it was a haiku! Damn censorship.

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It is not Haiku!

You are mistaken about it!

Try rhyming instead!

Anybody else besides me clapping their hands mentally (like school taught us) while reading these?

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You've inspired me to post my own Haiku thread.
Thanks for the creative jolt!

Whats the first US company that bragged about its haiku phrase being haiku??

Kangaruex4Ewe
Anybody else besides me clapping their hands mentally (like school taught us) while reading these?

I am doing it too ,counting syllibals on my fingers while reading and writing mine too .

This is a haiku
It makes you count while you write
Don't understand why

JHumm

Kangaruex4Ewe
Anybody else besides me clapping their hands mentally (like school taught us) while reading these?

I am doing it too ,counting syllibals on my fingers while reading and writing mine too .

This is a haiku
It makes you count while you write
Don't understand why

Glad it's not just me
That hears clapping inside my
Head sounds like cymbals

The peer pressure was too much. I had to give it a go.

Tsunami

Like a dream I wake
As a rouge wave I destroy
Sleep man and not take

An Alien Haiku:

Derpa derpa derp
derpa derpa derpa derp
derpa derpa derp

Give me liberty
There is no alternative
Or I will take it

Strayed
My god femininity,
personal aspect my dearest.
#, I am faithless.

That attempt at potentially artistic expression aside… Ugh, who writes haiku's? Brought to you by! Life and good scotch!

Haiku is an acquired taste as is most art that doesn't come from the networks or cable.



www.abovetopsecret.com...

fog of negativity
sitting in silence
waiting on a lie

JHumm
A haiku is 5 7 5
First line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables
Like this....

I like ATS
It's where I get my news from
Not from MSM

Hope that helps

Ha, I knew it was supposed to be 5, 7, 5 but I doubted my drunk perception and if I missed something in the definition. I appreciate your help though and your example.

Kangaruex4Ewe
I have never understood the mystery of the Haiku. I don't know why it's even done.

I also don't know if you got it right or not.

If you did... Great Job! If you didn't... you suck. I don't think you were really even trying.

Challenge in expression is my guess, thanks for the "great job" and the "you suck" either way.