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Dark Starts - SN2022 - (non writer)

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posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 02:58 AM
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One blurred eye squinted at the red digits with contempt, ugh, 4am. Reece feels his wife stir next to him, then spoon into him, she knows the time too.

The day ahead terrified him, but he was soon distracted by his wife, slowly caressing his nipple.
”Sandra” he whined with false annoyance, “come on baby”, she said, “we have time”.

The phone intrudes with a trill,

Reece fumbles and answers, and sits bolt upright, suddenly alone in his bed.
“Sandra?” he croaked, “Reece where have you been been??? I’ve been worried sick!” Said his dead wife of 6 years.

THE END


edit on 24-6-2022 by Albert999 because: Format

edit on 24-6-2022 by Albert999 because: Grammar



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 03:02 AM
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a reply to: Albert999

Well done!

A mixture of dread and grief.

Cheers



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 03:02 AM
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a reply to: Albert999

Be sure to link this thread in the thread announcing the short story contest.

Cheers



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 03:03 AM
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originally posted by: F2d5thCavv2
a reply to: Albert999

Well done!

A mixture of dread and grief.

Cheers


Thank you, I hope you read the right version, I made a right pigs ear posting it lol 👍🏼



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 03:10 AM
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a reply to: Albert999

I've read two versions now. Both were okay.


Cheers



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 03:43 AM
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Thanks for your Short Story,

Good Luck in the Contest!
Johnny



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 08:19 AM
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a reply to: F2d5thCavv2

Thank you 👍🏼



posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 08:20 AM
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a reply to: JohnnyAnonymous
Thank you too 😊👍🏼



posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 01:30 PM
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a reply to: Albert999

Intriguing! Every time I read it, I'm imagining different scenarios.





posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 03:16 PM
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originally posted by: Encia22
a reply to: Albert999

Intriguing! Every time I read it, I'm imagining different scenarios.


Wonderful reply thank you, that’s exactly what I was going for ☺️👍🏼







 
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