Oceans Waves Sunshine..., page 1

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 09:19 AM

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The light of the chosen wave was a footprint,
Turning the tides into deep mind thinkers.

Knowing love was through this tunnel of water gave us insight,
Finding a way to the other side was only a challenge.

With powerful love awaiting I took a step,
I leaped but jumped and skipped.

Along my journey I noticed the water told stories of you,
I could not wait until my journey ended.

A life saver of words you are my love,
Being a traveler my self I could see you too.

Another leap and a bigger jump this water is leading to you,
As the wave crashed her I am nice to meet you!

Our love lasted as we time traveled our lives away.💋

TNMockingbird

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 09:32 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Nice one Q!

You had me @ the ocean waves!

Quantum12

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 09:34 AM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thank you Chirp. You always make me smile.

BASSPLYR

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 09:45 AM
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Awesome poetry. Wish I was with my 9 footer south of the pier right now catching the low tide swells. A nice walk down main or ocean after a few good sets to get some late morning breakfast and watch the amazing women walk down the sidewalk. Maybe ill find the women the waves have been telling me stories about while waiting in between sets.

Maybe itll be the next girl paddling put. The one in the cute spring suit....no wait shes with some dude...looks like her boyfriend.....wait maybe this girl over there I like her smile and her sandy blond hair slicked back as she and her board surface from diving underneath a wave! Shes paddling out towards me....damn she does have a nice smile! please oh please......(crosses fingers)
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Quantum12

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 10:35 AM
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a reply to: BASSPLYR

You always write interesting truths. You left out Circle Bar, lol

midicon

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 01:03 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

I like the theme of the beloved waiting beyond the tunnel. Hey, it's the male seeking the eternal female...

I like too, the upbeat, sun, sea and air feeling your poems have.

S+F+B

Quantum12

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 01:15 PM
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a reply to: midicon

Thank you your always so kind. I messed up the second to last line and cannot edit anymore! Oh well lol

peppycat

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 01:41 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12 This poem just made me bubble up with goodness and made me smile. Very nice work!😊

Quantum12

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 01:46 PM
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a reply to: peppycat

Thank you Peppycat. Have a nice weekend!

peppycat

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 01:49 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12 Thank you. It's Friday! Have a good weekend too.😃

BASSPLYR

posted on Jun, 24 2016 @ 06:42 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Ha! Circle bar. Dont remember the circle bar too well id always bar hop over there after leaving o'briens and you know how that goes. Remember when for a short time circle bar was on wilshire down the street from Busby's and the gas lamp?

Man we must live within a mile or two of each other.

Anyways, have an awesome weekend.