When you were mine(the painting)

oil on canvas.

source:my paintings

Goes with this thread,

www.abovetopsecret.com...




When you were mine

we were so young

so much too young

could hold the time

just like a child

when you were mine

I was too young to understand

I took your hand in mine

like I hold your heart inside of me

I rushed deadlines

there were no doubts

to live our love, my dreams

melted in your dreams

could grow and carry me into your arms

when you were mine

and then one day I turned aside

just to play and so much died

and I'll be back to understand

I have lost your love

I have lost your line

in days gone by

when you were mine

life seemed to be a flight

into eternity

a revery without end

when you were mine

I reached the sky

I had your love and wings to fly

life seemed to be an exciting game

when you were mine

you turned aside

just to play

and so much died

you gave your love

for a moments dream

when you were mine

I close my eyes

and you are here again

and I feel once more the pain

when you were mine,

when time goes by

so slowly and rivers stops to flow

lonely time

still mine

life was a paradise

without and end

a flight into eternity

when you were mine

I reached the sky

like I will reach the stars

and we will fly again

to be with me...

....in eternity

reply to post by piequal3because14


Subtle, balanced, refined, marvelous

reply to post by ImaFungi

Subtle, balanced, refined, marvelous

Thank you ImaFungi.

reply to post by piequal3because14


Absolutely compelling. Many will read this and a lost cord will be struck, and think of a lost love. Thanks for a refreshing change.

reply to post by bladerunner44

Absolutely compelling. Many will read this and a lost cord will be struck, and think of a lost love. Thanks for a refreshing change.

I am happy that you like it and glad that I brought a refreshing change.

Lovely as usual. Love lost, I certainly know the territory to well. Where would artists be without love and the pain of losing love? So much beauty comes from pain.

reply to post by Iamschist

Lovely as usual. Love lost, I certainly know the territory to well. Where would artists be without love and the pain of losing love? So much beauty comes from pain.

Thank you for seeing the things in all of their beauty,indeed everything on this planet is born from love,and in the same time time everything of a beauty cannot survive without love

I just came across this piece of music for the first time, and thought to share it with you, one because I hope you can enjoy the music, but also because the associated painting reminded me of your style. Its a pretty cool painting eh, the detail in the background, the lighting, the subtle detail in darkness.

reply to post by ImaFungi

I just came across this piece of music for the first time, and thought to share it with you, one because I hope you can enjoy the music, but also because the associated painting reminded me of your style. Its a pretty cool painting eh, the detail in the background, the lighting, the subtle detail in darkness.

I liked very much the vid and the painting,thank you ImaFungi.

reply to post by piequal3because14


Pi where you at! Im desiring a new painting of yours, patience is a virtue and you should take your time...but I do hope you are painting! And I cant wait to see your next work, if you are planning on sharing it.

ImaFungi
reply to post by piequal3because14

 

Pi where you at! Im desiring a new painting of yours, patience is a virtue and you should take your time...but I do hope you are painting! And I cant wait to see your next work, if you are planning on sharing it.

I paint my friend,and posting them as usual,how can I not them post the on ATS ....but...lately I have my heart shaded by the ugly posters who come in the past and with bad and lying words they tried to destroy my work and my name.

Critique it's welcome,but when its coming as an bad intention from ugly people, it is not good for art.