Black Hole [CTPWC]

No

Don't go

Please come back

Wait

Please

I love you, I always have

You can't leave now, just when we've become close

Oh, God

No

Damn it, come back

I need you

I need you

Oh, crap

Damn

Why

Why just now

Damn

No

No

No

I can't handle this

I can't

I'm gutted

I love you

Damn it

I love you

I...

That


Was


Very


Good!


I like that I can relate to the words. Short and to the point.

Have you suffered a recent break up or is this about losing someone?

reply to post by imawlinn


Strangely enough, considering the theme of this contest, my writing the piece is the very real result of a recent loss.

So, yes, the words ring true to my feelings.