Commentary

I just want to start a commentary thread, where those not involved with a story can give their opinions on a story.

Kudos to the "I am a normal guy" writers. Your story is incredibly surreal, taking the reader on a verbal "trip." Excellent.

XAOS

Great idea xaos.
I have been wondering what people are thinking about the stories.Good or bad I would like to know.

BTW xaos the playground is the first thing I read in the morning.

what a great way to wake up

XAOS

It sure as hell beats the newspaper.

I have adopted the new practice of useing the "page" or "document" symbol for the story I'm am helping to contribute to. I intend for it to show that it follows along with the story and not personal messages. I have become slightly confused, do to suspect additions and so had to clarify my actions. Please enjoy and let us know what you all think.

Thanks xaos great idea!

oh god, Belgian Emporer UP? It fits perfectly for him Nans.

Viva El Emporer Ultra-Pheonix.

XAOS

Do you know how hard it is for a die hard australian like me to write seriously.....There are 4985374309857340985743 jokes flying through my head that would retard and make our Normal Guy novel quite funny but seriously lack the appeal it has right now.

I will keep trudging on..