posted on Dec, 22 2011 @ 10:48 AM
Pretty tight song all around, i think that production wise you are pretty solid. The only suggestions i would make were noted above and that's that
sometimes when you are going fast it is kind of hard to hear what you are saying, the best example of this i could find is around 2:34. My only other
suggestion would be to maybe have some kind of hook or chorus put in between your verses. This can maybe just help the song flow better instead of
just having the beat playing alone. These are just suggestions though in the end its you song lol overall though i liked it, better than i could ever
do