100 Bars of Wisdom......

Hello there ATSers. My name is Shawn. I have been on this site everyday for over a year now and just now signed up lol. I am a Rapper/Producer/Single father of one son. My stage name is SuperManning, and I am not a typical rapper however, I do not feel it necessary to be like the majority and promote moral decay. I tend to write about positive subjects and things that make you think. I have a song called 100 Bars of wisdom that I would like to share with those of you that would like to hear something other than the BS rap you hear on the radio. Please take a listen and feel free to comment!!!! Thank you and I'm glad to be in an atmosphere of wisdom as I see so many of you have on here.

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My website is *Snipped* other songs as well.

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reply to post by supermanning


Hey!

I cant download your Track cause my Pc is broken, is use my Ps3 for the Internet...
I make Beats..if you like to hear, go tomm

www.myspace.com/matar23
peace!

could you post a sample of your lyrics in text form for those of us who cant download right away?

thank you


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Here are the lyrics to my song 100 Bars of Wisdom, Now keep in mind that this is 5:15 of straight rapping and there is no chorus.

In a world where I can be anything, I be myself,
I'm a one man show, and I don't need no help,
I been through it all already, I don't need no more,
my brain is overloaded homie, just to think is a chore,
and I be gettin' sore, what am I fighting it for?
I never needed a life, full of excitement and lore,
but when I walk up in the club, yall better clear the floor,
cuz I'm a lion in this jungle homie, HEAR ME ROAR!!!
like the waves of sea, come up and batter the shore,
so do women to my brain, cuz they flatter and score,
and what I feel up in my heart, it doesn't matter no more,
got me feelin' like my cape, is kinda tattered and torn,
but its them I adore, protect and love from the core,
is what the bible taught me brother, love my mother and more,
and they when they tell you something honest, don't be quick to ignore,
cuz some are true in their hearts, and full of wisdom galore,
but some be fighting a war, between themselves and unseen,
just like a man for honor, when somebody steps in between,
We all just human beings, get along were the words of Rodney King,
and eventually, homie you will see,
that majority of people down to ride with me,
and pick a side with me, oh its gonna be good,
and I ain't even talkin' bout a hood,
hand in hand we stood, looking at the tree of life we could?
all its gonna take is a little bit of love, coming from the lord up above,
Everybody knows whats up, destroy all the knives and the guns and the drugs,
be pro peace, think about how we relate to yo speech,
be the change in the world that you wanna see,
only you can determine what its gonna be,
I don't know about you, but it's old to me,
to go to war with anyone openly,
If you want what you need, gotta pay fee,
that ain't the way everything was supposed to be,
Parents stand up, teach your kids, make it truth,
There is no excuse, to grow up being prejudice and racist too,
we from the same mom, same dad, so family is all we have,
Don't let the sins of your brother cause you to stray or drive you mad,
Protect your babies, from the danger in the world we go through daily,
then maybe, we can grow in the light of wisdom, and not be shady,
you can hate me, but to anyone that hasn't heard the phrase I love you lately,
It simple how 3 words can boost one up and help them greatly,
Mercedes, Lamborghinis, Ferraris, they mean nothing,
If you never set a goal to repent and to be something,
And don't be tough and, puffin' up to the man that's bluffin',
cuz it puts you on his level homie, and that level disgusting,
I hope I teach you all a lesson, and you learn it for sho,
cuz that was fifty bars of wisdom, still got fifty to go,
call me shifty capone, when I get up on the mic, I'm thrifty ya know
cuz I gotta live up to my name, and I gotta be real to the bone,
no fake or silicone, will make you a better person, I'm hurt
disperse my love and my pain, every single little verse in the worst way,
lets make today the day, of change, rearrange the game,
and start loving one another, and stop passing the blame,
and have the love of god within us and be one and the same,
and stop living in shame, stand up and call out his name,
wall out the fame, lights, camera, action, but I choose to remain,
cuz I don't wanna glory story and I choose to refrain,
People say "What about the money man? You sick in the brain!"
but I don't want the money, everlasting life to attain,
what could you gain, in a world, where everybody dies,
and everything you accumulated, is givin' to your wife,
and when your wife dies, it goes to the kids,
let about 4 generations go, only god knows where it is,
It's prolly on ebay, sit back and hit the replay,
and start from now, and look to god, and do what he say,
and he say, to follow him, and please don't betray
contribute to the moral decay, or promote the cliche'
and we pray, for everything, everyone from here to d-day,
and we pay, attention to the signs, keep faith and be safe,
and relay, the message of our lord and savior christ, to repay
a visit back to earth, to deal with all the dirt, and cremate,
anything and anyone, in opposition, so listen,
to the apocryphal prediction, as seen in our current condition,
got visions, Interpret with speed, and accuracy and precision,
and decisions have to be made, before the order is given,
and the order of livin' dissappears, like a mortal magician,
and we go back to living life, but with a perfect tradition,
my mission, to talk to any of you that be wishin',
I am by no means christ, I'm just a clever musician,
that's just been shown what's right, so that's why everynight,
I'm up on myspace and facebook, trying to spread the light,
people say my ish be tight, but its just a reflection of mind,
haters better back off my block, and find another section to grind,
cuz i ain't got time, to listen to you dissin', pissin', and whine,
or hear you braggin' bout your drunken stupor sinnin' behind,
if you aint got nothing nice to say, well don't be speaking at all,
no point in preaching poison, just to make everybody stumble and fall
like a crumblin' wall, it's gonna end up on top of the head,
not in the name of rap, cuz homie rap is dead,
but truth is life, and on the mic, I'm fin to spit it,
so they can look at me and say, Shawn Michael Manning did it,
I'm almost finished, just know, that I'm a master of words,
and I will find the syllables to bomb and plaster you nerds,
faster than birds, can fly, they must be higher than high,
cuz half these people can't even see me with an optimum eye,
I leave em wonderin' why, and steady blunderin' by,
cuz I got the power and conviction of a thundering sky
and I don't need no paparazzi, cuz i'ma just stay inside,
and write 100 bars of wisdom, try to live them, and die

reply to post by supermanning


Yeah very good Homie, well done man!!!
Would like to hear with a Beat, is it to find on youtube?

reply to post by Anunaki2012


Thank you very much. I honestly want to see the world change, and I'm going to start by being the change that I want to see. Love conquers all evil and tyranny. The equal and opposite reaction to hate is love.

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or you can hear the mastered version at the address in my signature.... Thanks again yall.

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Thank you for the feedback Moderator as I am not trying to rebel against terms of use policies. I just want to share my music and wisdom with a group of people that know what wisdom is. Is it ok to tell people that they can send me a Private Message to get the links in the meantime? Thank you again.

Nevermind, you answered that question and I just didn't read it right. I'm sorry. I'll take that off of my signature.

reply to post by supermanning


Hi Shawn you have lots of time to tell and show us your music. Once you attain 20 posts you can open a thread in the Music Forum and from their you can post and share your music.
As I say there is lots of time, we aren't going anywhere.

Ok so let me use this post as it is designed for. First, Like I said, I am a Rapper/Producer from Casper, Wyoming. Yes I know, people don't think that anyone in Wyoming listens to rap, let alone rap themselves but I do. Please look past the location of where my music comes from and rather hear the message in what I am trying to say with it. I have been through very much in my life already. I am 27 years old and divorced with a child that isn't legally mine because of the family law beurocracy that runs rampant in Wyoming. I am a free man as well as a Ron Paul supporter because the life of my son depends on it. I love knowledge and wisdom and I pursue it with every breath of everyday that I am alive. I have been very close to death before as I am the sole survivor of a car accident that killed 4 of my friends 12 years ago so I know how precious life and friends truly are. I hope by becoming a member on this forum that I can make many like minded friends and people who truly seek truth and light. Thank you all for being my fellow man/women.

reply to post by supermanning


WOW!!! This is the first rap song I have truly enjoyed listening to. Good job!!

I'm not a christian but I love the message.

Just one thing, why do you use so many double negatives?

reply to post by Stormwind


Because honestly using double negatives in a world where no one understands proper grammar and punctuation anymore will make it far more understandable than someone who uses proper english. I know proper grammar but I'm afraid that if I use it 100% of the time that only 1% of the population of the world will understand it. LOL Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it and thank you for asking about my english, it shows me that there is very smart and knowledgeable folks here at ATS.

reply to post by supermanning


Your welcome and thanks for the reply. I can understand now I will be looking for more of your work soon.

and I will post the link where you can hear all of my music and buy it if you would like to support what I do. If you can't afford it or just don't plain want to buy anything I understand that too. I will be glad to send anyone who would like a copy of anything I have ever made for free as well. I'm not in this thing for the money, I'm in it to open eyes and unlock minds.