Michigan Artist Looking for Feedback

Tell me what you guys think of this artist:

www.reverbnation.com...

Genre HipHop

We just started to promote and you would be surprised how hard it is to get constructive criticism.

Love the illumanati part in a memory, Good flow dude Only thing i can think of is the producer (if there was one),But im second guessin that due to the track Martyr!

15 seconds of my life I won't get back.....

reply to post by i8miceb4


Man that's totally not cool, a guy puts his heart on the line and shows you his work and you just diss it, shame on you.

reply to post by sir_slide


Its all good dude. Im actually looking for feedback. If its negative- what don't you like about it?

reply to post by Darkoisme


Things to think about:

Delivery ( how well the words are said and the overall execution of the song)

Production ( the beat- Some were made by me)

Quaility/engineering ( the actual recording & quality)

Content ( whats being talked about)

Volume

etc. im sure theres a few topics im leaving out