The DOOR

Originally posted by ISeeTheFnords
Good. Commendable even.
But i get the sense I'm about 1/3 to 1/2 through chapter one.
Keep up the good work.
Avid reader of all sorts of writings. BTW. And really, it did grab me.
Seems like talent, but i look forward to reading the rest. (although for a short story, the point was made, and i suppose sufficient, leaving the reader to draw their own interpretations/conclusions, which is also the "model" of a good short story.
But still, wishing there were more.

Thanks,
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Thank you, for reading my story. I will try to make another segment. I have more of this tale fleshed out, it goes into the underground workers, and their lives and daily grind, and of course since I am female, a love interest.

Wow! Loved it!

From one bunker to another - well done! Thanks for sharing

You're welcome, General Eyes! Thank you for taking the time to read my story.