posted on Nov, 10 2009 @ 07:54 PM
It wasn't bad, not at all. It initiated an emotional response, which is what any good commercial should do.
I liked the music, untill the singing began, ... if you re-edit it, i have a few tips.
Keep the same music or something like it.... start out slow as it did, .. however near the end, play a loud, fast chorus, ... and have the images
speed up faster and faster, untill it ends at the loudest part of the song, ending in an emotional " explosion"... ..... and suddenly all is quiet,
... as you show " join the revolution"
my thoughts are kinda scattered, but i hope you got the jist, ... and you did a great job bro, .... now hit up ATS for some advertising dollars.