Your Daily Haiku, page 43

posted on Aug, 27 2010 @ 01:36 PM

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By verse and haiku
Some exorcise their daemons
Blood stays on the blade

posted on Aug, 27 2010 @ 05:14 PM

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I just re-read my last Haiku and realize now that I screwed up...all three lines are 5 syllables.....my OCD is driving me crazy as I cannot edit it...

argentus

posted on Aug, 27 2010 @ 08:44 PM

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reply to post by The Motorcycle Boy

A little tweaking, and..........

Cannot edit it
Just re-read my last Haiku
Driving me crazy

No remorse or angst
sometimes flash between the lines
OCD sweet dreams

These are weeds we prune
Lovely wounds that cut and bleed
Together we share

Spiramirabilis

posted on Aug, 28 2010 @ 08:53 AM

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reply to post by The Motorcycle Boy

anarchy bears art
hot and dear while breaking laws
mathematical

MB - this should make you feel better - I just realized that was really only one line split three ways

[edit on 8/28/2010 by Spiramirabilis]

Spiramirabilis

posted on Aug, 28 2010 @ 09:36 AM

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resist this midnight
river’s bed draws night away
herons dream their trees

Mike Stivic

posted on Aug, 28 2010 @ 03:39 PM

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Im flabbergasted,
Blindsided and bewildered,
empty and alone,

pushed along by time,
these solitary seasons,
Turned my heart to stone,

argentus

posted on Aug, 30 2010 @ 08:46 PM

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Fought, aye, and I died
Seven of us walked to peace
Reborn red were we

The Motorcycle Boy

posted on Aug, 31 2010 @ 05:59 PM

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I have OCD
Poor me pour me another
Just biting my nails

The Motorcycle Boy

posted on Aug, 31 2010 @ 06:03 PM

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Some babies have these
Those mammory memories
Thinking about tits

argentus

posted on Aug, 31 2010 @ 09:10 PM

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American cheese
As some American dreams
Too oily for me

edit to change 'salty' to creamy'. Better? NEVERmind.
edit to change 'creamy' to 'oily'.

That's my final answer.

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[edit on 31/8/10 by argentus]

argentus

posted on Aug, 31 2010 @ 09:19 PM

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reply to post by The Motorcycle Boy

Last two -- two great faves
But who saves these raves we crave?
in our hearts, you're made

The Motorcycle Boy

posted on Sep, 1 2010 @ 07:08 PM

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reply to post by argentus

I'm glad you went with oily. It makes me think of some medications they hock on TV. "Side effects may include dry mouth, rash, oily discharge..."

Not sure I would want to take a medication that had oily discharge as a side effect....

Spiramirabilis

posted on Sep, 4 2010 @ 12:16 PM

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sleep in augury
feathers cast on weather’s floor
sparrows wheeling home

[edit on 9/4/2010 by Spiramirabilis]

Spiramirabilis

posted on Sep, 8 2010 @ 07:48 AM

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a crow calls quiet
blue held gentle in that tree
gesture loves today

argentus

posted on Sep, 8 2010 @ 05:35 PM

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Clearing the land, I,
Eloquent of sweet fatigue
Lay down my head tired