Your Daily Haiku

blithely shivering
reckless enraptured grim man
reverberates lush

stars float in first blooms
small white signs across my night
one bud holds the moon

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ravens caw glumly
frightened crooked grainofsand
now singing desert

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Windswept memories
echo through the sands of time.
Reflections of life.

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echo listen now
disperse blindly snowbird
funny topknot quail

Murder in the wild
Scavengers will eat your corpse
Shall the snake abide

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hey KOA aka Louie

:-)

this makes me smile

is that wrong?

gonna have to think about this one for a bit...

back later -

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Mongoose posed to strike
fangs bared, rattle shakes, fear strikes
prepare for battle

You will not be missed
The food chain will carry on
Over your carcass

But when one tree falls
Three emerge there from its grave
Ratio of life

For every kill
A family will be full
And out of harm's way.



EDIT: Apparently "carcass" is not spelled "carcus" lmao what a simpleton I can be.

[edit on 2-4-2010 by KyleOrtonArmy]

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And Patiently I shall await your reply...

Until then, here's an excellent Haiku...

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You will not be missed

oh, now - that is just a thing of beauty

I've much to think about KOA

but no thinking without caffeine

later -

I was actually referring to the dead animal in the wild not being missed, as the food chain will carry on without it.

Certainly, I would not speak to you in such a manner, if that was your thought.

By the way, in my post I promised a great haiku and the next post was supposed to deliver, yet you included no haiku in your post, thus making me a liar.

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I was actually referring to the dead animal in the wild not being missed, as the food chain will carry on without it.

I know! this is why I love that line - so very much

we both know - we are part of that same process

Certainly, I would not speak to you in such a manner, if that was your thought.

oh, go ahead and speak to me in such a manner - I'm tougher than I look :-)

... yet you included no haiku in your post, thus making me a liar.

that doesn't make you a liar KOA

it just makes me look lame and slow

:-)

still thinking...

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I'm...

lame and slow today
old bones, new Zen not spoken
time to make coffee


[edit on 2-4-2010 by whaaa]

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:-)

whaaa...I'm still thinking about your OTHER one

trying to caffeinate myself out of a morass

later guys -

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What's to think about darlin...

It's just word jazz

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oh, whaaa...

you have no idea

:-)

It's only word play
Just think of where the birds lay
Squirming for their worm prey

You don't need caffeine
Nobody needs anything
We are sufficient

maria stardust, spiramirabillis, and whaaa

My favorite posters.

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Thanks! KOA