The Tropic of Cancer

I was born under a full moon
A Monday
In the tropic of Cancer
The moon takes me
Sweeps me away
on torrent rides
Leaving me to drift the tides

To be born under this sign
With the moon full on a Monday
That is a burden no man should bare
For the Tropic of Cancer is a lonely place to fair



Edit to ask if it sucked. and to fix some stuff





[edit on 14-2-2009 by LoneGunMan]

it don't suck it just seems unfinished as if there isn't a complete thought

reply to post by LoneGunMan


Sounds good to me. Not a poetic person so unfortunately can't add but, poetic of enough to enjoy.

[edit on 27-2-2009 by Ant4AU]