You...

Silence fills my head
The unchecked whirring ground to a halt

Where did you go?
I can feel the gaping hole where you resided

Was it somthing I did?
I did not mean to offend if I did

Silence
I know where you went and why, but still I am traumatized

Come back.
Please free me from my inprisionment

You put me here.
Release the chains that hold me, push open the rusty gate

Thank you.
My mind is yours to crawl around in, your playground

Be safe.
In your travels away from me, I'll be awaiting you

Have fun.
Soon you will fill my mind again, probing and clawing.

How do you do this?
I do not conceede
Yet your burrow deeper
Into my mind
Into my soul.

Nochellontly stepping on my life
Drawing all my attention to you
Your smile greets my every concern
Neither kind nor cruel
Jesting.

Teasingly final, but eternal
You slide back into my mind
Uncaring of it's consiquenaces
I uncaringly accept your probe
Smiling

You talk of finality, eternity
I grasp for both
Like a caged bird
Shackled to a stone
My leg bleeds because of your chain

Still I smile
Always I will smile
Never will I fear
In you probing me
I find you.

Hmmm. That had a bit of a darker tone to it, thought I didn't mean it too. Still, came out pretty good. The fingers type as the mind rolls, I do not dillute it or interfere with it.

I see you.
In my head.
Looking through my eyes.
Looking through my brain.
Finding all the things you like.
Sending elation though you.
You gyrate and grind
at my pain and pleasure alike.
Your grinding drives me
Insane or more sane
I cannot answer
Grind more.
Stop the whirring of my head
Grind harder and remove the chaste from me
Divuldge nothing but your esctacy
Show nothing but your lust
I'll not mind.
I'll never complain.
I'll give you more to grind to
More to gyrate with
Don't stop...
Too hot.
Don't stop....
Please, don't stop.

very interesting thread to say the least. I see quite the intellectual romance going on within your poems, with the last one getting a little hot

Please do continue to share

I like your stream-of-consciousness style. Keep it up, Jkd.

I also would like to hear more, or has the thirst been quenched?

WOW! I am absolutly overwhelmed by how this little piece of myself has effected so many!

I humbly thank all of you for your support, input, and U2Us! Now comes the daunting task of trying to not let my fans down

I have to thank you all for your pacients for waiting for more. No, the thirst has not been quenched... the words find me... And wreak havoc on a computerscreen elsewhere.

Ages have passed.
So it seems.

time purged you from my mind
Distractions got in the way

they say all distractions are equal
All seem to be.

All pull me away from you
Leaving empty excuses

Passion has been lost in my life
My joy taken from me

On my way to finding it again
Finding the aim

My mind grew lost and unnavigated
Away from you and me

Lost in an endless maze of doubts
All pointed at me

Any now I reconstruct my life
Rising from the ashes

My new wings dry and feathers fluff
Seeking their way to the sky

Looking down I see the cinders of my remains
Looking up I see the direction I must head

One hour of morning excersize has doubled
Bone toughened
Muscle increases
Dertermination crushes doubt

Harder I push myself every single day
Fear cannot find my in my newer form

My eyesight might be a bit worse though
I cannot see you

you started all this with you words
And whispers in my mind

No one or nothing else will do
Come to me or I'll come to you

[edit on 2-2-2009 by Jkd Up]

Bright lights now shine on me
Eyes of many peer
Further into my heart and mind
And images I share

Smiling I put on my sunglasses
A darkened tint to hide
The future of this thread
And thoughts I will bare

Times and torments tearing at me aside
In from the darkness I come again
To let the one who started this know
In her I still care

Her sweet smile flashes in my mind.
A sweet caress of her hand
A taste on her breath of wine.

"I have tried to forget about you."
Her words mouthed
Her rehtoric forth she spewed.

Only one knows if she is telling a tale
Hiding in the mysteries of my mind
Crunching as if walking on kale.

If the subject successfully lost
Than surely I shall die
My legacy a total loss.

I yearn...
I desire...
I need...
I want...
I strive...
I compel...
I arise...




.....................................................For you.

More...

Quietly you slide into my life
Waking me early in the morning
Hoping to catch a glipse
Knowing I will not see
Heart soaring
Health stronger
Stress non exsistant
Looking at the frsh tattoo
Life is anew...
I am alive...
I have survived...
I have thrived...
I will continue...
I will persist...
Still comitted to excellence...

I have returned.

Such an inspiration?

But what my dear do you inspire?

Perpetual midnight in my head
I try to peel the memory of you from me.
You being gone is slowly killing me.
Forever entwined, but now seperated
I wake at night to your scent
Swear I feel you next to me
But still wake to an empty bed
You...
You drive me
You...
You make me thrive
You...
You slay me with a bitter sword

Originally posted by interestedalways
Such an inspiration?

But what my dear do you inspire?

I usually inspire anger and parents to hide their daughters...

I don't know... You know me... What do I inspire...?

Like a vampire, you sneak into my life
But it is not blood you seek
Passion
Heat
Need
Want
Desire
Fill you as you slither into my abode
But like a true hunter, you don't senslessly attack
You enjoy it
You have the upper hand and you know it
Crouched above my sleeping body
Your victory assured
Upon your alter is my destination
All other options do not exsist

I can see you in my dreams
Your teeth biting flesh
Tormenting my soul
Devistating my will

You are there. I can feel you
But I am neither afraid or willing to open my eyes
Your toothy smile burned in my head
My brain's content filled with you
My desire filled with you
My need filled with you
My want filled with you

Slowly you smile, bearing the sharp ivory white teeth
Damage inevidable
Pain unquestionable

You are my God
You are My Eminence


As your tongue traces my jugular,
I awake...




Happy Holloween!!!

You are such a freak..........

Could have done without the "toothy grin" but I love you anyways.............

You bite my soul.............and make me like it............