(WILD) Wilderness Challenge Commentary

Seeing as I'm a bit of a tool, I really didn't think about feedback for the Wilderness Writing Challenge that's currently running. So, please post comments about entries here. Writers enjoy the feedback, trust me.

DE

That first one from Mojo was pretty good

Thanks vegemite glad you liked it, i liked EdenKaia's. Nice mood to it.

Uggggggh!!! I HATE writing in the present tense... That felt like a tooth extraction...



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OK, mojo4sale I just finished reading your entry...and the others. That's spooky! It's like we were writing the same story from two different vantage points... When I saw you reuse the opening line at the end, I almost fell out of my chair!

Get out of my head, will ya????



...or maybe I was in yours...


[edit on 11-8-2006 by loam]

Loam, I enjoyed it very much.
Can't figure out why the deer never escape.

Very nice Loam, we both even used sated. Weird Btw i sometimes think theres more than enough room in my head for at least a couple more people, your always welcome.

Great minds think alike

I liked yours too Siege. The deer only ever escape in Disney movies im afraid.

[edit on 11/8/06 by mojo4sale]

Originally posted by mojo4sale
Weird

I agree.

Originally posted by SIEGE
Can't figure out why the deer never escape.

For one, there are too damn many of them...at least in some parts of the world.

I might add, however, that the one I used is endangered. (Would you have expected anything less from me? )

Thanks for the complements, guys!

I enjoyed your contributions too....


[edit on 11-8-2006 by loam]

Liked your second story Curiousity, those wascally wabbits. Btw not saying i didnt like the first one.

Originally posted by mojo4sale
Liked your second story Curiousity, those wascally wabbits. Btw not saying i didnt like the first one.

Thanks mojo4sale, hey, how about selling me some of that mojo so I'll be a winner on the next contest, eh?

Btw, I liked yours too.

Originally posted by curiousity

Originally posted by mojo4sale
Liked your second story Curiousity, those wascally wabbits. Btw not saying i didnt like the first one.

Thanks mojo4sale, hey, how about selling me some of that mojo so I'll be a winner on the next contest, eh?

Btw, I liked yours too.

The mojo's on it's way. The leg bone of a black cat that's been killed in a graveyard at midnight in a cloth sack. Use it wisely, no one can see or touch your mojo or it will lose it's power!

Originally posted by mojo4sale
The deer only ever escape in Disney movies im afraid.

One word.......Bambi. Of course, I suppose death is an escape, when looked at from a certain perspective.

Originally posted by EdenKaia

Originally posted by mojo4sale
The deer only ever escape in Disney movies im afraid.

One word.......Bambi. Of course, I suppose death is an escape, when looked at from a certain perspective.

I thought of that as i was writing it but went ahead and posted anyway, ohh well, most disney movies