My New Comic - Nils

i recently started a project where i`m going to tell a story through comics. The main charecter is Nils (the bald gentleman), more charecters will appear with time. Some feedback would be cool (the language may seem a bit weird as English is not my first language, so I had to translate them in a hurry.

other cartoonists are welcome to post their comics here.

Wow, that is a cool strip.
Thanks for sharing