posted on Feb, 3 2007 @ 11:06 AM
I'm thinking id like a better main line/idea than yesterday is burning, simply because 30 seconds to mars has a song called from yesterday and it
sounds similar. So if anybody ha ideas please leave them.
Yesterday is Burning,
Vast and Deep,
It's secrets churning,
Yesterday is burning,
The universe,
Closed and churning.
Yesterday is burning,
oceans of the universe,
Quiet, empty, ever churning,
Silent ,
Quiet,
Missing,
Churning,
Changing,
With not a bit of sound.
Tommors sea amidst the clouds!
Crashing waves,
Silent Crowds,
Yesterday, it's ashes spade!
Tommorows waves destroy the old,
Yesterdays embers,
Falling into Blackened clouds,
Crashing Waves,
the photon band,
Silent storms,
Jupiters moons,
The eye of its storm.
Yesterday is burning,
observe the storm,
it's quiet, churning.
Yesterday is Burning,
Jupiters power,
the eye of it's storm!
Trembling Waves,
Crashing Clouds,
Blackend eyes,
So Surprised,
Raining Ember,
Drunken Shallows,
Tommorows newer Wave.
I'd also like a better ending line for anybody who might have ideas.....but noone reads these poems anyways so i dont know why im asking. lol