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Full Moon Off Path Venture

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posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 12:03 AM
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Serene silence all around,
the crunch of snow the only sound
With air clear calm and cold
fresh takes of tales recycled, old
Under the same ancient moon
lighting paths to mankind’s boon
I found the ladies tree
and said some words for you from me
I lit three wicks
in honor of the ridiculous
Which to me meant the maiden.
I honored the time you and I played in.
The jokes and laughter;
the wicked flashbacks after.
The rubber ducky launches
the backup you’re staunchest
I lit two wicks in honor of the mother.
And for your two sides emotional, other.
Your brilliance and wit,
tempered by a mind fit
And a love I felt from places remote.
And a mind keen to share and emote.
I lit one wick to call to the crone.
The wisdom and intelligence you made your own.
I smiled in silence and a small bit of sadness
But overwhelmingly serenity peace and gladness.



posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 03:57 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

Beautiful and perfect, Zosimov.




posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 07:37 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

yeah, it's full degree serenity...

I feel it with your poem
upside down,

marvelous, Zosimov



posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 09:50 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

Beautiful!!! Reminds me of the day I jumped a bridge in my dad’s loving sports car when I was 14! I ended up in the lake behind our house.

It was a nice moment while in the air!




posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 10:02 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

Brlliant Zosimov!

S+F



posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 12:41 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions

This is awesome!



posted on Jan, 26 2024 @ 02:05 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

Had to translate it for myself, it's very beautifully written. Standing applause from me, beautiful. It also reads really well in my language. Deep and touching.

Was at the post office today, had to take out the Nutella because the weight for this box size cannot exceed 5kg, went back home, filled out the customs note again. So many rules. Tomorrow morning the post bus will come and take it away. It should finally be with you in 6-10 days.



posted on Jan, 27 2024 @ 05:02 AM
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