Ancient Astovia…

a reply to: firstofAkhet

You are the best, just so you know I wrote the above for my best friend who died 3 years ago and today is his birthday. He loved music so I wrote him a song. I am not a good writer at all its just what comes out! Happy bday Ryan 💥🍦💥

a reply to: JJproductions

It's really all about the eggnog.

I didn't show enough love
So it left me for someone else.

a reply to: pthena

Lol, you are funny!!! 🥛

a reply to: firstofAkhet

I think your short story is amazing!!!

originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: firstofAkhet

I think your short story is amazing!!!

I haven't written it yet.

originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: firstofAkhet

You are the best, just so you know I wrote the above for my best friend who died 3 years ago and today is his birthday. He loved music so I wrote him a song. I am not a good writer at all its just what comes out! Happy bday Ryan 💥🍦💥

That's good. It's all good. We all have our flavor. I couldn't possibly begin to understand the things that go on in somebody's mind. Sorry about your friend! See ya.

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a reply to: midicon


Yeah thanks. I can be a bit blunt sometimes.

I try to layer it with a bit of "you do you, that's fine" because I'm not all caught up in anyone else or myself. I just don't think any one thing should predominate. Maybe I'll quit with the whole, I'm in my room and everyone has a pantera video on kinda act.


But I can't. It's a personal style and kinda how I navigate things on here to maybe try to feel around and break some ice. But I'm glad you agree honesty is key. Sicka having to restrain myself! Peace cheers..

a reply to: firstofAkhet

This must have touched your soul!

Must we trust this world of haven or kiss the bride of that pretty dark raven. There she flies as she eats the lies as the world dies but only you can cry

a reply to: JJproductions


Your blowing it outta urs. Lol.

I would ask you but I trust your just being


A VERY SILLY MONKEY!!!


👍 teehee.

originally posted by: firstofAkhet
a reply to: JJproductions


Your blowing it outta urs. Lol.

I would ask you but I trust your just being


A VERY SILLY MONKEY!!!


👍 teehee.

Lol

a reply to: firstofAkhet

I hope you stick around and comment here in the writer's forum. It does get a little sychophantic and while that can encourage it can also be less helpful than constructive criticism. It can be difficult though as feelings get hurt and others jump in to defend.
I'm fortunate though as I know I write nonsense and don't take myself too seriously. I think your first comment here was fair and I value honesty and insight.
If you see me writing something and feel the urge to comment feel free. We need a little of what you offer here. I wonder too (not in a snarky way) if you have tried as you write well.

a reply to: midicon

originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: midicon

Lighten up JJ, I am not against you. I did say before that it was difficult to 'fickle out meaning'. That is, what you were trying to convey in particular relationships. I still liked and starred your writing as I like the quirkiness, novelty and words you use.

a reply to: midicon

Thank you, it’s just "love song to G-d” “HU”