You kept it all…, page 1

posted on Sep, 5 2023 @ 09:32 PM

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He saw fear, uncovered words.
She ran again, for puddles of blood.

They held hands, forever to keep.
His life ended, for time is eternity.

We found a tree, for love to hide.
Upon the rock, sketches of time.

Darkness for life, the silly side.
Dirty my mind, holds the truth.

To run or hide, joining other worlds.
Stealing ropes, together we climb.

She had nothing, you kept it all…

Degradation33

posted on Sep, 5 2023 @ 10:54 PM

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a reply to: JJproductions

Like it. It seems sad, but speaks to mood.

Sorta abstract, leaves mystery.

Well done.

This short stories forum got me writing poems again. I forgot how cathartic it all is.

edit on 5-9-2023 by Degradation33 because: (no reason given)

JJproductions

posted on Sep, 6 2023 @ 12:18 AM

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a reply to: Degradation33

I really enjoyed your new poem! Thank you for the comments!

Encia22

posted on Sep, 6 2023 @ 04:16 AM

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a reply to: JJproductions

That's melancholic, JJ.

I'm glad you offset the sadness with the Ernie gif.

JJproductions

posted on Sep, 6 2023 @ 04:50 AM

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a reply to: Encia22

Haha, thank you! The gif makes it!