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Saving Me...

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blend57

posted on Aug, 16 2023 @ 08:14 PM
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Saving Me


I plucked some stars out of the sky,
Pulled Halley’s tail as it passed by,
Collected drops of fresh morn dew,
So I could give new breath to you.

I traversed the Backwards Galaxy,
To reverse and change reality,
So all your dreams would come true,
And you could live your life anew.

I whispered sacred words of old,
To keep the hands of death on hold,
So you would have the time you need,
To finish all your worldly deeds.

What I didn’t expect to materialize,
Is the love I felt when I saw your eyes,
And how that touched my very soul,
A love I thought I’d never know.

I thought that I was saving you,
To do the things you needed to,
But now I have come to see,
You were the one saving me...

Thanks,
blend

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JJproductions

posted on Aug, 16 2023 @ 08:16 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Saving people is amazing! Sometimes you can’t save people all the time. Today you can! Excellent!!!!


KTemplar

posted on Aug, 16 2023 @ 08:28 PM
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a reply to: blend57


Beautiful Blend ⭐️


pthena

posted on Aug, 16 2023 @ 08:59 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Beautiful


nugget1

posted on Aug, 16 2023 @ 11:07 PM
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a reply to: blend57

How beautiful! That is incredible work that really hits deep!


Encia22

posted on Aug, 17 2023 @ 06:10 AM
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a reply to: blend57

blend57, I love it! It's immensely tender and profound.

With your very first line I immediately thought of a Duran Duran song and video, What Happens Tomorrow.

Very fitting, IMHO. An inspiring song for an exquisite poem.




Quadlink

posted on Aug, 17 2023 @ 06:29 AM
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Very creative, i like it.

All the best


Seeker42

posted on Sep, 20 2023 @ 07:01 PM
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a reply to: blend57

This really warmed my heart and give me hope, thank you for sharing your talent


argentus

posted on Sep, 20 2023 @ 07:25 PM
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You were both saved in the end, weren't you. This is beautiful and amazing poetry, and I'm just sorry that it took me until now to notice. Your cadence and flow are ethereal. I am in awe of your verbal chops. Well done!!!


JJproductions

posted on Sep, 20 2023 @ 09:40 PM
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Agreed, amazing writing!!!



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