Time Clocks of Love…SOT2023 --non-writer--

Non writer
Born 3733 AD

Oh beautiful time clock about to ring,
7604 years are a tuning thing,,,
The light labor against the wall,
Baby my love I promise never to call,,,

From sounds to pounds I’ll give you no pain,
Each day of time as it always rains,,,
All the blood emptied in to your veins,
My clock of love has many names,,,

You missed me there and over here,
As time changed we made you a mirror,,,
Reflection of lives taken far back,
Intruders of time couldn't attack,,,

Time was now for time was back then,
I searched for love and found it again,,,

The End

a reply to: JJproductions


That was a great poem, even better that it told a story too well done

a reply to: SprocketUK

Thank you! I am king to read your entry today…

a reply to: JJproductions

Exquisite JJ.

Truly lovely.

a reply to: Moon68

You are so kind! Thank you!

S&F

Nice story and it made me feel better.

a reply to: Untun

Awe I hope you feel much better! I will read your story today!

a reply to: JJproductions

A touching and inspiring poem, JJ!

Nicely presented, too; the image is a nice touch.

a reply to: Encia22

Thank you, the meaning for you can be anything you want. For me it was something lost in the sands of time.

a reply to: JJproductions

Excellent poem. I particularly enjoyed the following lines:

Reflection of lives taken far back,
Intruders of time couldn't attack,

a reply to: merkins

I kindly thank you, I loved your amazing story!