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Without Wings - SN2022

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posted on Jun, 4 2022 @ 09:30 PM
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I had but one desire – to fly without wings.

The instant my eyes prised open, I looked to the azure void. However, empty it was not! I witnessed wispy plumes, billowing cotton candy and ominous behemoths. From glistening droplets to lofty waterfalls to radiant rotund rainbows. In darkness, I beheld glittering lit specks sprinkled across the heavens.

Launching ever upwards, I fulfilled my dream for mere milliseconds, cruelly tethered by gravity. One day, dreamingly distracted, I tumbled into a bottomless chasm. Overwhelming obscurity turned to brilliant clarity. A novice Angel had I become, albeit wingless, at last, I took flight!




The END
edit on 4/6/2022 by Encia22 because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 4 2022 @ 10:06 PM
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a reply to: Encia22

The very first steps into the Minds Void there is nothing like it .

Very good sir.



posted on Jun, 5 2022 @ 12:27 AM
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Thanks for your submission.


Good Luck in the Contest!
Johnny



posted on Jun, 5 2022 @ 04:11 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

En, you're far deeper than I


Enjoyed reading this one.

Cheers



posted on Jun, 5 2022 @ 05:59 AM
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a reply to: F2d5thCavv2

That's kind of you to say, F2d5thCavv2!

I think everyone harbours deep thoughts. Modern life doesn't always allow us to explore them; we suppress them instead of tapping into those emotions. My life has been filled with hurt and I find it difficult to express those experiences... hell, I don't think I understand them myself. Unfortunately, I only have three modes, I either mask what's inside with comedy or I pour it out directly and undiluted or I withdraw into digital art. I wish I could just be normal.




posted on Jun, 5 2022 @ 07:17 AM
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edit on 5-6-2022 by Ahabstar because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 21 2022 @ 09:19 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

Beautifully written, Encia! I love the language and visuals in this piece.



posted on Jun, 21 2022 @ 09:55 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

I appreciate your feedback, zosimov!

I think I was contemplating more my own life, its limitations and my desires. The wings and flying were the first metaphors that came to mind; perhaps wingless flight seemed the most liberating option, albeit at an extreme cost...





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