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"Legends of the Fall" (a Staff 4 Fun Story) -LF2021-
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a reply to: JohnnyAnonymous
Those early drafts sound interesting, and would work in a long version of your story. The character limitations of ATS's contests forces us to prune away a lot.
The important thing is that the basis of the story is sound, everything grows from there. After which, if you remove some elements at least the foundation is still strong. I guess this is valid for many other things in are lives, especially relationships.
Those early drafts sound interesting, and would work in a long version of your story. The character limitations of ATS's contests forces us to prune away a lot.
The important thing is that the basis of the story is sound, everything grows from there. After which, if you remove some elements at least the foundation is still strong. I guess this is valid for many other things in are lives, especially relationships.
a reply to: JohnnyAnonymous
Your story gave me the rush I feel when I watch the 1975 movie Rollerball! You created a visual world outside of our current perception and painted the walls with color.
And then to finish with a hook is the best of things -- at least for me!
Enjoyable story ;o)
Your story gave me the rush I feel when I watch the 1975 movie Rollerball! You created a visual world outside of our current perception and painted the walls with color.
And then to finish with a hook is the best of things -- at least for me!
Enjoyable story ;o)
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