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Alive [LIF2018] Non-Writer

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SupermassiveBlackHOLE

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 02:02 AM
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What is life
Unless it is alive
These Dreams of love
Have scattered
Through fields of my belonging
Song birds spoke
Delicate truths
More often than not
I am left breathless
Beside the edge
Of the undescribed
You could keep on waiting
Never would
I Waste any of your time

------------ The End.

I realize it reads almost like a poem.
It's a story to me.


DictionaryOfExcuses

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 03:53 PM
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a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

You have a (good) way with words.


SupermassiveBlackHOLE

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 04:42 PM
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a reply to: DictionaryOfExcuses

Thanks friend !


Trucker1

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 07:12 PM
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a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

Very nice! Perhaps you will win in the end?


SupermassiveBlackHOLE

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 07:19 PM
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a reply to: Trucker1

Hahaha.
I'm not sure about all that..
Though I do appreciate the kind words!


highvein

posted on Dec, 10 2018 @ 07:25 PM
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Wow. It kind of has a Poe vibe with some of his poetry.

I can't wait to read more from you.





SupermassiveBlackHOLE

posted on Dec, 11 2018 @ 04:04 PM
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Poe is one of my favourites.
I'll see what I can do to keep the material coming


KTemplar

posted on Dec, 11 2018 @ 04:35 PM
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My favorite so far!







 
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