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Life is[LIF2018]

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LucidWarrior

posted on Dec, 3 2018 @ 05:55 AM
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Life is
A tremulous half breath
Released in wonder;
A careful beauty,
Beset by vicious boredom.
A boundless landscape
Of myriad shifting possibilities
Cascading into reality.
A proving ground,
A story board,
A well worn canvas.
A priceless treasure,
Kidnapped by time
And divided by minds
Obligations and desires.

The End


SprocketUK

posted on Dec, 3 2018 @ 06:13 AM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior



That was bang on



LucidWarrior

posted on Dec, 3 2018 @ 02:47 PM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

Glad ya think so, mate!


Night Star

posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 01:21 AM
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Beautifully said and summed up!


LoneCloudHopper2

posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 01:27 AM
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Well written as always, LW. Hope you win!


LucidWarrior

posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 11:15 AM
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Thank you Star, and Lone ^^


dreamingawake

posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 02:32 PM
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I like how you structured your story on top of the nicely flowing description.


edit on 4-12-2018 by dreamingawake because: (no reason given)


SupermassiveBlackHOLE

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 02:27 AM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Beautifully written.


5StarOracle

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 02:37 AM
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My favourite so far!
hope the end does not count in your word count...


727Sky

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 03:58 AM
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Well done


LucidWarrior

posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 01:04 PM
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a reply to: 5StarOracle

Lol I hope not!

Thanks, 727, dreaming, and black hole


Night Star

posted on Dec, 6 2018 @ 03:35 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

You are allowed one more entry for this contest if you'd like to write another story.




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