Pushing your way to the everafter [YJA2017]

Non writer

Died many years ago...

She pushed the love from hell to the limits. It was her time to come back from where they placed her in 1946. It was the soil that freaked her out. As they sholved earths dirt over her casket she awoke with fire over her soul.

Women and soldier's with green eyes fired blanks as they put Nancy away again. They were sure her journey was over.

Nancy grew up on planet Ventura's moon 7. Moon 7 was earth like with out the oceans salt. All the water on moon 7 was fresh like a new born planet. Nancy grew up as a star child.

Nancy reached her maximum height of 62 feet when she was 7 Earth years old. Nancy was short compared to other Venturians. Her new life was nothing compared to her other afterlife.

Nancy was the gatekeeper to hells door traveling to her new afterlife. When some lost soul arrived Nancy placed a spike in their hand and sent the soul back to find peace or kept the soul in hell.

Hell was so beautiful. The hot fire kept us alive for this life. The love we shared was the love that made minds explode.

Our ride of time was a wound taped to the wildfires on earth.

Don't push for the ever-after, enjoy the wave.

The End

a reply to: NwoDedispU

Very nice writing. 62 feet is huge! oh my gosh, thats massive.

sf

Nice story

a reply to: NwoDedispU

a reply to: NwoDedispU

Hi NwoDedispU!
I think that was the first alien afterlife story I've read, lol. Really enjoyed it!

The last 2 lines,
"Our ride of time was a wound taped to the wildfires on earth."
"Don't push for the ever-after, enjoy the wave."

Very creative! You should write more.
S&F
jacy

a reply to: jacygirl

Ventura's moon 7 has great energy and says thank you!

a reply to: NwoDedispU

Well done, nice thoughts were felt by me afterwards.

bally

a reply to: bally001

Thank you bally001.

a reply to: NwoDedispU

Waking up in a box underground is something that has always freaked me out.
I think there was an old old movie like that.
Can't remember the name now.

Good luck and thanks for sharing.

a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thank you for reading.

Very creative! Good luck!

a reply to: Night Star

Thank you Night Star

a reply to: NwoDedispU

Good day!

Have a *bump*.

Like stars and flags and smiles...they're free!

a reply to: jacygirl

right ya ok.

a reply to: NwoDedispU

Nicely done. I liked the juxtaposition of something so grounded as earth being shovelled over a coffin with the otherworldliness of Moon 7 and then, the description of hell.

I love the starkness of it, the spaces you left allowed my imagination room to grow as I read.



Thanks for sharing!

a reply to: SprocketUK

Thank you for taking the time to read my story!

Nice