Mindless

This is not a story, but rather a poem. I used to write them. Lately, I had a feeling and this came out. ee cummings is my inspiration. I have been thinking about writing stories. Someone said I would be good at it.

i saw you
i didnt
t hogh t you
where there

remnant

i look and see
a for(her)mer
doing
what he can't

miscreant

when will you
be
just be
you
me

a reply to: gator2001

Interesting that mate. Wots it mean??

Sounds like someone having issues wishing to transform into their desired transgender state of being...

No offense meant... just what it sounds like...

a reply to: 5StarOracle

Ya you could be right mate. Confusing that, looks like they're trying to transform into something anyhow heck if I can tell what that is.

a reply to: Archonic

unrequited love

a reply to: gator2001

I might be too stupid for this, but

t hogh t ... t stands for time?

Wrong time wrong place kind of thing?

a reply to: gator2001

you have been thinking about writing stories ?

someone said you would be good at it ?

run with it !

ps: very nice poem. interesting how you put it together. i like weird stuff like this myself, it leaves so much open for interpretation. interesting also to read your friends comments. interesting how we all are so different. i am very tired today, so i will not even attempt to interpret it in any way. but the feelings i had when reading it were pleasant.

Thanks everyone for your comments.

No, it is not about a transgendered person...lol

It's about an alcoholic. T hough t is the mind not thinking clearly, but he can see that he is not himself. For(her)mer is his former self and he is using his wife as inspiration to return to being the way he was.

He wants to be himself again.

a reply to: gator2001

Glad to hear it!