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awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:17 AM
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Are they passed out all over your living room right now?

Do you do this often? lol


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:17 AM
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a reply to: JinMI

Lol exactly. That is what I told them. A keg is for a big party.


JinMI

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:18 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Well party on good sir!


awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:19 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

ok well, maybe you should arm yourself with something just in case. They may end up to be vampyres or worse!!!.


awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:20 AM
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2 drinks and that's it for me. lol


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:21 AM
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No they took a taxi to James Beach in Venice Beach to drink more vodka. No I don't do this often. Lol. My friend Taylor is from Hawaii and she had her friends come out for the weekend and they are going crazy!


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:22 AM
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I will lock my bedroom door, they might mistake it for the bathroom


JinMI

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:23 AM
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It sounds like a dream come true but man I've been there and it's nothing but babysitting!


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:23 AM
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Oops sorry we drifted your poem. It's amazing writing!


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:24 AM
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Now I will be the babysitter!


JinMI

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:25 AM
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Meh, You two are the only flaggers and were discussing the deeper intricacies of the story!


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:28 AM
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Yes and this thread is all about how we feel about your writing. Amazing so let's have a beer! Be safe in Michigan. I miss Michigan for the seasons and the snow!


JinMI

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:29 AM
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You be safe too man, gluck with the womens.

P.S.
You can have the snow!



awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:32 AM
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good plan!
maybe bolt it too just in case.


awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:35 AM
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Hey you wrote about intricacies we were merely pointing out how well written it is.


You should write more like that.


JinMI

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:36 AM
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I'll see what I can do. I will admit, it was really fun to write.


awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:45 AM
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You've both inspired me to write and stretch my horizons a bit more. It's nice getting feedback it helps.
It really is fun yeah, i enjoy it as well.


JinMI

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:47 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Excellent, looking forward to more short stories then!!!


awareness10

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 03:49 AM
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Definately, and i think i'm off to lotus land now, it's been fun you guys!

Here's to more Short Stories and Poetic beauty!
edit on 8/6/2016 by awareness10 because: error


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 04:02 AM
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Ok good night too! More stories!



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