The Caliph's Fate. (HipHop/Poetry Verses). 1st time sharing on ATS.

Verse 1;

Pen & Pad?... It's Been A While... (Me)
Getting Back To Spittin Wild..? (Arch Angel)
Plenty Man Are In Denial... (Me)
So Let's Attack Em, With A Smile... (Arch Angel)


Behead A Man, & Kill His Child... (Devil)
Say They're Islamic?... This Is Vile... (Me)
Never That, You're Infantile... (Devil)
This Devil's Pacts A Written Trial... (Arch Angel)


Al Baghdadi & His Minions... (Me)
Hound Iraqis & The Syrians... (Me)
Foul Attacks On Their Civilians... (Arch Angel)
Saudis Back Em With Their Billions... (Devil)


Islamic State?... (Me)
It's Heathens That Believe This... (Me)
& The Media That Repeat This... (Me)
But Beneath Islamic Preachers... (Me)
They're Extremist Anti-Theists... (Me)


Satan's Agents That He Summoned Should Get A Clue... (Arch Angel)
Making Claims Of Things Muhammad Would Never Do... (Me)


Frightened Beast...Why The Need..? (Arch Angel)
Lies Are Easy & Common... (Devil)
Tryna Cease... My Beliefs..? (Me)
I Scream Peace Be Upon Him... (Me)


Remember My Heavy Hearts True... (Me)
So, Tell Em When Heaven Asks You... (Me)
I Detested The Death Embargo... (Me)
Of Benjamin Netanyahu... (Me)


He's Clandestine... (Me)
You Should Keep That In Mind... (Devil)
Wonder Will Peace Have It's Time..? (Me)
So I Scream Free Palestine... (Me)






Verse 2;

You'll Never Stop My Horde Of Soldiers... (Devil)
I'll Protect You Like The Lord's Supposed Ta... (Devil)
I Deteste You & Your Sordid Culture... (Me)
I'll Be Sent To God, When All Is Over... (Me)


Continue Waiting For A Saviour... You Humans Are Pathetic... (Devil)
It's You Satan, That's In Danger... The Truth Has Been Prophetic... (Me)


Men Are Liars And You Trust Them To Be Honest...? (Devil)
They Were Pariahs And You Judged Them For Their Knowledge... (Me)
Only The Messiah Brings A Judgement To The Prophets..? (Devil)
Only The Decider Brings A Judgement, Not Apophis... (Me)


My Kingdom Is This Outer World... I'm Over You... (Devil)
I'm Bringing People Out Their Shell... You Know I Do... (Devil)
Your Kingdom Is The Bowels Of Hell... We Know The Truth.. (Me)
We Resist Your Evil, Cowards Sell Their Soul To You... (Me)


I'll Be Back To Tempt You Fool...
I'll Be Hostile When You Least Suspect... (Devil)
& I'll Attack Again For All...
Who Want To End Your Evil Quest... (Me)


End Transcript.




C.S.






This is the first time sharing my own lyrics on ATS...
So I didn't know if this should go in Music or Short Stories.

Well done you. It takes guts to share your verse specially on such a place as ATS where people can be so harsh. Have you made some beats to go with it. Maybe you could post a recording when your ready. Keep on trucking.a reply to: CharlieSpeirs

a reply to: Cloudbuster

Still in the decision process for an instrumental, to be honest.
I'll spend the next couple days working out what sort of beat works best.



Thank you very much for the kind words too, Cloudbuster!

Much appreciated.

Are you any good at beat boxing not sure if that's the right word or not, what I mean is making all the sounds and beats with your own body and sampling them, what kind of musical equipment are you making music on? On tv in nz at the moment is nz version of the factor and one of the guys who got accepted did beat box and singing with a little sampler thing, it's on YouTube pretty cool check it out.
a reply to: CharlieSpeirs

a reply to: Cloudbuster

Nah, Beatboxing is very difficult.


I can write, and I have good breathe control for difficult tempos...
That's my niche.




I used to use FruitLoops, but I haven't made my own beat for about 3 years.
More recently I've been using other famous HipHop instrumentals...

Sounds like stealing, I know, but it's actually a common alternative to making your own...


One person will use a beat, and then basically everyone else will do their own version.
Sort of like a competition of who can do it best with a specific instrumental.

You rap with the "Devil" ?

He gets lines in your song, so just askin.

Isn't that blasphemous or something, being all inviting to the dark side?

a reply to: TinfoilTP

Only if you think I'm actually interacting with the Devil...

Rather than putting words in his mouth for artistic effect.




I think the Devil has far more important things to do than converse with me to be honest.

originally posted by: CharlieSpeirs
a reply to: TinfoilTP

Only if you think I'm actually interacting with the Devil...

Rather than putting words in his mouth for artistic effect.




I think the Devil has far more important things to do than converse with me to be honest.

Oh I see, so you are artistically dancing the Devil and what you name an Archangel like puppets on a string, performing for you in metaphor.
How can you be sure it is not the other way around and you are being danced on a string, hahaha.

a reply to: TinfoilTP

Hilarious, clearly, if you needed to type the laughter out into digital form.

I can't be sure, I guess.


However, if you read it carefully...
I rejected everything "the Devil" put forward.



So he's not a very good puppet master if this is his plan.



"Unless he wants to lull you into a false sense of security..."

Yes, quite.




Not performing for me either...
Unless you feel that's how art works.

I'm not too sure Al Pacino thought the Devil was performing for him in Devil's Advocate...
I'd liken it more to that, than a South Park episode.

I scanned it and noticed the anti Israeli statements so didn't give it much thought beyond the obvious structure and irony of a religious person writing songs laced with hate. Your message is, hate ISIS hate Israel, did I miss something?
Is your next song going to be if you like Israel you like ISIS?

a reply to: TinfoilTP

I never actually mentioned Israel.


I did mention Netanyahu though...
Maybe that's why you're confused.


I've never hated Israel. Or Israeli people in general.
I hate their foreign policy, very much.


I think it's a bit extreme to suggest that I believe people who like Israel like ISIS too.



Leave the conspiracies to the conspiracy theorists.
Keep me out of it.

a reply to: CharlieSpeirs

Did you call the devil apophis? You know some stuff most aren't aware of.

If there is only one God, then all the "gods" in other religions are either names for God in their languages, the devil and adversaries, or angels (for example how some Christians believe Jesus is God even though he prayed "not my will, but Thy will be done.") and I'm convinced that this so-called "god" of darkness and destruction (whether they call him apophis, apep, ahriman, or any other name) is really the devil. It doesn't sound like the One God who is Merciful of glorious light who created the angels to me.

Keep exposing the devil's lies. Good luck with finding a good instrumental to record the rap.

a reply to: arpgme

Thanks for the kind words arpgme, much appreciated!

Yes, the Apophis remark was directed at the Devil, so to speak.



To the best of my knowledge, Apophis, or Apep, is closer to a Demon, than the actual Devil...
So as well as alluding to the similarities in evil, therefore a lack of the ability to judge mankind, it was also to demoralise him and lower his perceived self supremacy as much as possible, to that of a Demon, rather than the ruler of all Demons.
Like a double meaning, if you catch my drift.



Thanks again buddy.