No title(wrote 7th of January 2014)

I see my reflection
It's right in the glass
No time for preparation
I fear all my pasts
Dead flowers cover the ground
Is this all I see?
Cranial mind spinnin 'round
Tar black it will be
Sun no longer shines
Stars begin to dim
Paying for my crimes
I've done to all men
My reflection blurs fast
Acid tears always last
Alone in this world that's full.

Thanks for reading
-nat

reply to post by natalia


Wow, that's powerful stuff Nat.
I'm going to send you some sunshine, since you write such beautiful poetry:

reply to post by beansidhe


Hey thanks for that my sweet friend very kind of you. Sunshine is the best

This poem wasn't finished and so since my lil guy decided to get up extra early today, I finished the last few lines this mornin.
Hope all is well with you and thank you for your kind words

reply to post by natalia


That is a wickedly dark piece. Well written as ever. I like your contrasting styles of poetry as you well know Hugs sweet Natalia

reply to post by TheDoctor46


Thanks doc.. Yes dark.. Darkness has been swirling all around. I just pretend to be happy I don't wanna bring others down with me ...
Hugs to you too sweet friend xx

reply to post by natalia


You would never bring others down. Don't worry what others will say or think. You deserve to be happy you know