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Originally posted by Manhater
Rap is poem, and poem is rap.
It only matters of what kind of beat you put to it.
Originally posted by GmoS719
I liked it...
The guy above me scoffs at creativity because he must not have any.
Sounds poetic to me! S&F
Originally posted by BoyMeetsWorldATS
Originally posted by GmoS719
I liked it...
The guy above me scoffs at creativity because he must not have any.
Sounds poetic to me! S&F
That's a pretty serious claim coming from somebody I don't know. Maybe if you put a little more work into your post and articulated your thoughts, you wouldn't have settled for such a cheap shot at me.
Keep trying, Life's a journey
Originally posted by Anonymous404
reply to post by FractalChaos13242017
I knew I'd see you here.
Your poem was good, but the rhyme scheme seemed a little forced in the beginning. I loved how you fell into it later on though.
Fact of the matter is I hate Immortal Technique. I love good rap music.
But...this was actually inspired by the poetry of Rives www.youtube.com...
or the comedy/poetry of Tim Minchin attacking pseudoscience. www.youtube.com...
I watched way too much Def Poetry Jam as a kid.edit on 6/19/2012 by Anonymous404 because: added info