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ACEDIA --- Non Writer HS2023

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Agleaya

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 10:54 AM
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A☾E☽IA

make a wish
turn back
spin around
like a wrack

a crack of mine
never right
only scars they shine bright
in me

don't care anymore
encore
you always find a way to swore
a hole into my ticker
depths

it seems like I'm spare
from anything until there
hypocrite in the mirror

The End.
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Encia22

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 11:37 AM
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a reply to: Agleaya

That's an emotive poem, Agleaya. Thank you for sharing it.



 


Welcome to the Short Story Contest. If you can still edit your entry, please try to add "The End" at the end and "Non Writer" in the title, so that others know your story will compete in the Non Writer category. If you place in the top two, you will gain Writer status on ATS.

Good luck

edit on 4/12/2023 by Encia22 because: (no reason given)


Agleaya

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 11:38 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

Thanks, I fixed it.


Encia22

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 11:42 AM
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a reply to: Agleaya

Very good.

By the way, I like what you did with the C and D in the poem name... very creative!


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Agleaya

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 11:55 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

Thank You so much!


JJproductions

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 03:05 PM
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a reply to: Agleaya

Very nice! Welcome to the contest!
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