No Worries.., page 1

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 03:46 PM

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No Worries

The wind kisses me as it passes.
Seduces me with its cool caresses.
Whispering lovely things in my ear,
Soft quiet secrets no other can hear.

The river skips over well worn runes,
Which play a warm and sunny tune.
A melodious sound that can only be heard,
When you escape from the human world.

The trees shelter me from the day,
And as the wind dances, so do they.
Shaking their leaves so I can hear,
The sacred knowledge they've kept for years.

The clouds pepper the summer sky,
Soft pillows pleasing to the minds eye.
Perfectly placed upon the canvass,
Meant to mesmerize or enchant us.

The human lays face up on the grass,
Watching as the puffy clouds pass,
Listening to the wind and the trees,
Then falling asleep, free of worries.

Thanks,
blend

JJproductions

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 03:54 PM

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a reply to: blend57

Love it! I read to me “the wind blows beautiful seeds of love in to your hair as the soft wind changes time”. Awesome

Peeple

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 04:02 PM

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a reply to: JJproductions

Really? 'Blows seeds of love in to your hair'?
Are you that much into blend, or what is this?
I mean poetry is all about expression of feeling and desires but that seems a little on the face, or on the nose.

JJproductions

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 04:10 PM

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a reply to: Peeple

Thank you Peeple for the lesson. I am honored you replied to me! I guess we all see writing as different!

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Peeple

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 05:20 PM

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a reply to: JJproductions

I'm pretty sure I am not the only one who was 'surprised' by your choice of words.

JJproductions

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 05:42 PM

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a reply to: Peeple

I gave a you star! Thank you kindly! I remember once when you told me that you are a professional poet. I think you should write a poem! It will be amazing!

Encia22

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 05:47 PM

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a reply to: blend57

Excellent, Blend!

I find it particularly relaxing and I can almost feel the wind around me.

Peeple

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 05:54 PM

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a reply to: JJproductions

I'm very sure I've never said that. And if I did it was probably a joke.
You could just own what you did, you know?
Because your attempt to deflect comes across a little desperate.

JJproductions

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 06:01 PM

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a reply to: Peeple

It is an amazing poem! I don’t want to take away from the OP! Have a great time!

JJproductions

posted on Aug, 20 2023 @ 06:13 PM

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a reply to: Encia22

Agreed!